Developmental editing software for fiction writers

Your manuscript,
read whole —
before a word is said.

Most feedback tools read a paragraph. Giluma reads your entire manuscript, your characters, your voice — then speaks.

Six editorial lenses. Voice protection that locks your stylistic choices out of critique. A personal book model that learns your fiction as you write it. Feedback that knows the difference between a mistake and a decision.

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Fiction writers only
No auto-rewrites
How it works

Seven ways Giluma reads your book

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Context Assembly

Before any feedback, Giluma builds a full picture of your manuscript. Every character. Every stylistic note. Your full book — assembled into a single editorial context.

No tool reads a paragraph in isolation. Every observation accounts for the whole.

Context assembled
Manuscript Characters Voice notes Style rules
Full context loaded — 10 agents ready
02 / 07

Feedback Loop

Every observation is a question, not a verdict. Agree, disagree, request context, or ignore. Your responses teach Giluma what matters in your book.

Nothing is applied automatically. The writer decides everything.

The opening paragraph reads as backstory rather than scene — is this deliberate?
Agree Disagree Context Ignore
Voice Agent — awaiting previous response
03 / 07

Six Focus Areas

Six specialist editorial agents — each trained on one dimension of fiction. Plot, character, voice, pacing, dialogue, and structure. Each reads with a different lens.

Feedback that knows which problem it's solving.

Plot
Character
Voice
Pacing
Dialogue
Structure
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Voice Protection

Giluma never flags a stylistic choice you have claimed as your own. Comma splices, unconventional punctuation, deliberate fragments — locked out of critique forever.

Your voice is not a bug to fix.

Comma splices in interior monologue Protected
Sentence fragments for emphasis Protected
Em-dash dialogue attribution Protected
Add a protected choice…
05 / 07

Chapter Intent

Tell Giluma what a chapter is meant to do before writing it. Every agent reads your intent first — feedback is calibrated to what you were attempting, not to a generic standard.

The most powerful single input in Giluma.

Chapter intent
This chapter needs to break the reader's sympathy for Marcus without making them dislike him. The shift should be felt, not explained.
All 10 agents read this before the session begins. Feedback is filtered through what you said you were trying to do.
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Personal Book Model

Giluma builds a living map of your fiction as you write. Characters, themes, recurring patterns, your response history. It learns your book the way a human editor would — over time.

Every session is smarter than the last.

Character consistency — Marcus
Voice consistency
Pacing rhythm
Thematic coherence
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Studio Mode

A distraction-free writing environment where Giluma stays quiet unless asked. No popups. No interruptions. The agents continue building context in the background.

Write first. Giluma waits.

Studio mode — active
Agents listening — press  Tab  to surface
Built for fiction writers

Every feature is a deliberate choice

Whole-manuscript context

Every agent reads your full book before speaking — not a chunk, not a paragraph. No observation arrives without knowing the rest of the story.

Voice protection

Claim a stylistic choice and it disappears from critique permanently. Your intentional decisions are locked — Giluma never misreads craft as error.

Feedback that learns

Your agree/disagree responses update your personal book model. The more you use Giluma, the more precisely it understands your fiction's logic.

No rewrites, ever

Giluma observes and asks. It never rewrites your prose. The writing belongs to you — the analysis is ours to provide, yours to decide what to do with.

Genre-aware

Literary fiction and thriller read differently. Romance has different structural contracts than historical fiction. Giluma adjusts its editorial lens to your genre.

Studio Mode

Full distraction-free writing. Agents wait. Context builds silently. Pull feedback when you want it — the software never interrupts your writing state.